A freelance translator’s life

 Another way of being a writer

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As you know, I’m an author. I published some thrillers and science fiction novels, plus a non-fiction book. But being an author isn’t the only way I’m a writer. I do like writing articles and newsletters, but I especially like translating.

Actually, I’m a freelance translator for almost 20 years now, and lately I decided to dedicate a few articles to this job of mine. They are featured in a Medium publication called Babel, which you can find at this link: https://medium.com/babel

Three articles are available so far.
1)      “Why I am a translator” is about my journey to become a translator, starting from my first encounter with a foreign language when I was five, continuing with my experience studying English, French, and German, while becoming a biologist and a university researcher, and my decision to use my language skills in a profitable way.
2)      “What is translation?” explains the translation process in the mind of a translator and how being able to speak two or more languages isn’t enough to make you a translator.
3)      “Use of translation software” is about the tools a professional translator uses to deliver the best possible version of a text in another language (usually their native one).

If you are a Medium paying member, you can find them at the following links:
1)     Why I am a translator
2)     What is translation?
3)     Use of translation software
Please use these links if you’re a paying member.

If you are NOT a Medium paying member, you can use these friend links to read them:
1)      Why I am a translator
2)      What is translation?
3)      Use of translation software
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I hope you’ll find them interesting.
If you speak more than one language or are a linguist, please share your experience.

COBRA

An intriguing political thriller series

Sky Original (©)

This Sky Original series includes three seasons aired between 2021 and 2023 (until early 2024) and available on demand on Sky.

The story is set in a contemporary context. In the first season, due to a large coronal mass ejection, a solar storm hits Europe, bringing air transport and energy distribution to their knees. The British Prime Minister must deal with the consequences of this event through an anti-crisis unit called COBRA.

The series doesn’t talk about the catastrophic aspect of the story (and that’s the best thing!), but focuses on the way in which politics (above all), the press and public opinion deal with the crisis. It talks about difficult decisions, about characters who try to take advantage of the situation for their own benefit, and about others who risk their lives to complete their work.

Central to the plot are the characters of the (conservative) prime minister, played by a Robert Carlyle in great shape, his chief of staff, played by the excellent Victoria Hamilton, and the head of the secretariat for civil emergencies, played by phenomenal Richard Dormer (whom I had already appreciated a lot in “Fortitude”, where he was the police chief).

While the prolonged blackout brings a whole series of problems and protests to one of the regions of the United Kingdom (the one that the Prime Minister had to sacrifice, despite his intentions, since there was a lack of spare parts to restart all the power plants, and therefore he had to make a choice), the protagonists find themselves facing serious personal and family vicissitudes.

The tension rises, episode after episode, until it reaches its climax in the last one (there are six in total), in which the story is resolved with some appreciable dramatic twists.

I admit that at some points I literally cheered.

I watched the series in the original language, and this allowed me to appreciate several nuances, such as the social differences and territorial origins of the various characters.

In general, I think the story is very well written, also and above all in terms of dialogue.

Season 2 — Sky Original (©)

This first season could almost be defined as a self-contained miniseries, given that it only includes six episodes and the story ends in some way. However, two more seasons were subsequently produced: “Cobra — Cyberwar” and “Cobra — Rebellion”.

In the second season, as you can guess from the title, the crisis affecting the United Kingdom is due to an attack on the British computer system. In the third, instead, the crisis is linked to an environmental disaster.

I liked the first season so much, I wanted more. At the same time, I feared that the choice to extend the story into a second and then even a third season would have caused an inevitable fall into repetitiveness and useless lengthening. Also because it meant that there would be at least one more big crisis, which honestly seemed a bit excessive to me in the same narrative universe and with the same characters.

Indeed, this risk has not been entirely avoided, and we need to make a little effort to accept that all happens to poor Prime Minister Sutherland! But, once this problem is put aside, I have to say that the second and third seasons are also very enjoyable, and I find myself more or less confirming the opinion I expressed for the first.

I won’t say anything else to avoid unnecessary spoilers.

Season 3 — Sky Original (©)

Maybe, if you want to watch this series, you can take advantage of the fact that all three seasons are available so you can watch it all from start to finish. This way you will not lose the connections between the seasons or forget them.

In short, you won’t risk doing as I did. Since I wasn’t sure I had seen the second season, I watched it all again because I couldn’t remember almost anything anyway!

Halo (season 1)

 A review from a non-gamer.

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Let me start by saying that I’m not interested in video games. The last time I played them was on a Windows 95 PC in 1998. So I don’t know what this series is based on. I’m talking about it as a TV-watcher who loves science fiction.

It is a military science fiction/space opera series, set in a distant future, full of beautiful spaceships, planets with the most disparate characteristics and an enemy alien species with which humanity is at war. And one of the most powerful tools of war humans have at their disposal is the Spartans, enhanced and emotionless human warriors. Among these is the protagonist, John-117, known by the nom de guerre Master Chief.

I won’t tell you anything else about the plot because I think it’s better to discover it step by step over the course of the nine episodes of the series. Rather, I’ll just clarify that I’m only referring to the first season. In fact, upon seeing it, you immediately realise that all the narrative threads do not have enough space to be concluded. It almost seems like a great introduction to the rest of the seasons. In any case, there are some aspects that are clarified. Furthermore, I found the twist ending (almost a cliffhanger) very satisfying. With such a complex narrative structure, there was the risk that certain threads would be closed too hastily, but, all things considered, this was not the case.

The plot contains a whole series of elements that are particularly congenial to me.

One of these is undoubtedly the fact of having a protagonist who does not know his own identity at all, and the revelation of the latter is central to the series.

Another interesting element is the use of artificial intelligence (Cortana), which was conceived as a tool for control, but which at a certain point asks itself questions about whether it is right to follow the orders. Here, the AI, which at the beginning has a disturbing and apparently negative connotation, then turns out to be a positive character.

Then there is the presence of a deeply ambiguous character (even more than the AI) in the hands of the supervillains (the aliens), who has a particular evolution. It’s a shame that this character has to fall victim to the usual ruthless karma of American productions, in which repentance is never enough to redeem oneself.

But aliens aren’t the only bad guys. They are in fact only the supervillains, that is, those who are just bad, without any apparent reason. Even among humans are some decidedly negative characters, such as Dr. Halsey, who is head of the Spartan program. However, in her case, motivations are brought to light which, however excessive, have an intrinsic logic that provides the character with a certain depth.

Finally, the special effects are for the most part truly remarkable. The aliens reminded me of several creatures seen in the Star Wars saga. Perhaps only the setting of the battle in the last episode is a little poor.

The only thing that puzzled me was the location of the device that suppresses the Spartans’ emotions: in the lower back. Meh!

Overall, I enjoyed watching this series. The story is intriguing and well-developed. And at the end of the viewing, the curiosity remains, and you are looking forward to diving into the second season as soon as possible.

“Halo” is available on Paramount+.


The War of the Worlds (BBC miniseries)

A great adaptation of the novel by Herbert George Wells


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This BBC miniseries from 2019 (directed by Craig Viveiros and produced by Mammoth Screen), set in the Edwardian period, is yet another adaptation of the novel by Herbert George Wells (published in 1898) and consists from three episodes of about an hour.

 

It is considered one of the most faithful transpositions of the book both because of the historical setting (despite being set a few years later, in 1905), which further highlights humanity’s impotence in the face of an alien invasion, and for the narration of events itself.

 

What is added to the original plot is the personal story of the two protagonists, Amy and George, who live together despite the fact that they are not married and that he is unable to obtain a divorce from his wife. These two only partially replace the narrator of the book and his wife, however, shifting the attention to the female character, who was completely marginal in the original text. They are played by Eleanor Tomlinson (already seen in Poldark in the role of Demelza and in The Pemberley Mysteries) and Rafe Spall (son of Timothy Spall; seen in PrometheusJurassic World — Fallen Kingdom, and Men in Black International).

 

Furthermore, the main narrative is intertwined with the one in the future, in which we see Amy and her son wandering in the devastated world after the “failed” invasion of the tripods.

 

Even though I had not read the book, I immediately perceived the Wellsian imprint in the story, starting with the character of Ogilvy, the scientist also present in the novel and here played by the great Robert Carlyle, and continuing with the attempt to a scientific approach, although limited by the knowledge of the time, towards the consequences of the invasion, although this last post-apocalyptic part from the point of view of the female protagonist was added to the original story.

While reading various reviews, I noticed that the main criticisms concern a certain depressing effect of the story, its slowness in some parts, the lack of characterisation due to the limited time of the narrative (which perhaps, therefore, is not so slow) and even the acting skills of the main actors. Someone said it was a missed opportunity.

Well, I don’t agree at all. Personally, I greatly appreciated this miniseries, both from a visual point of view and from that of the actors’ performance and the pace of the narrative.

 

I watched this series in the original language, and as always in these circumstances, this led me to focus completely on the story without the slightest distraction. Furthermore, while watching it, I already knew that the ending would be sad. Some of it was immediately obvious due to the flash-forwards of the protagonist with her son in that hellish setting, and some of it was told to me precisely in these terms.

 

Faced with all this, however, I just had fun.

 

I like Tomlinson a lot (I’m a Poldark fan) and I appreciated her performance. And I also liked the way she interacted with Spall and also with the character of Ogilvy and Frederick (Rupert Graves), the co-protagonist’s brother.

 

The story between the two protagonists, who challenge the conventions of the time, goes perfectly alongside the political problems, which are shown to us at the beginning of the miniseries (with the frictions between the British Empire and Russia), in highlighting how many aspects considered important not only fade into the background, but are completely swept away by the encounter and clash with a species from Mars that intends to eliminate our civilisation and take possession of our planet.

 

Obviously, the story of the two protagonists offers a further element of conflict that is appreciable by the contemporary public and increases their involvement.

As for the rest, I found both the historical reconstruction and the special effects very effective. Watching the immense tripods move through London at the beginning of the twentieth century is fantastic, precisely because it is completely unusual and yet extremely realistic, and underlines even more the sense of human fragility towards an adversary that is too bigger and technologically advanced to be even just faced. In some ways it mocks the expansionist aims of the British Empire, which feels invincible in the face of any enemy and is instead forced to come to terms with the hard reality.

 

I particularly liked the part in which Ogilvy, together with the protagonists, begins to study what he believes to be a meteorite and then what happens when the latter wakes up, the shell opens, and we see a sphere inside capable of impressing a reflected image on itself. Not to mention what happens next.

 

The sense of helplessness of the characters is effectively conveyed to the viewer, as is the fear of the terrifying aliens, particularly in the last episode, when they find themselves hunted by the latter (whose appearance we finally see), and the story takes on horror nuances.


Here the dramatic element reaches its peak, and the inevitable sacrifice has a very strong effect due to the involvement it creates in the spectator.

 

The part set in the post-apocalyptic future, with which the series ends, actually has something depressing about it. I, in particular, don’t like post-apocalyptic stories for this reason. Even from a visual point of view, it seems it wants to oppress. But everything is saved by the bittersweet ending, which gives rise to hope in the protagonist, and in the spectator.

 

I close with a quirk. Although this version is faithful to the novel in many parts, there is another version in the form of a film which seems to be completely faithful. It was produced in 2005 in the wake of the concurrent release of Spielberg’s film starring Tom Cruise and Dakota Fanning. This is “The War of the Worlds” by Timothy Hines.
There have been numerous other adaptations of this work, ranging from the first very famous radio show by Orson Welles (1938), through musicals and video games, up to comics (including Mickey Mouse in Italy), as well as obviously films and TV series.
An almost complete list is available in an article dedicated to it on Wikipedia.

 

Here is the original trailer for the series.


 

This article is taken from a phantom episode of FantascientifiCast (Italian podcast about science fiction), recorded in 2020 but never released.

Westworld: the epilogue without an ending

 My thoughts on one of the best sci-fi series in the last 10 years


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In the past, I happened to talk about the TV series “Westworld” on FantascientifiCast (the link will take you to an English translation on my blog). However, the podcast episode and article only focused on the first season, as it was the only one that had been produced to that point.

 

It was followed by three more seasons.

 

If you have not seen the second and third seasons, stop reading, as you may find some spoilers. On the fourth, however, I limit myself to making some considerations, but which only really make sense to those who know what I’m talking about. In short, this article is mainly aimed at those who have seen the entire series.

 

The second season represented a true continuation of the first, since the story still took place within the park. At the time, I found its ending exciting, because it would have satisfied me even if they hadn’t renewed the series for more seasons. What I wanted was for the story to continue outside the park, in the real world of the future. An open ending like this, with the escape of Dolores (or rather her artificial intelligence), was at least a promise of this continuation.

 

One of the reasons I love open endings in stories where there’s a lot that is left unresolved is that I can always imagine for myself what happens next.

But then the third season actually arrived, and it was even better than expected.

What I appreciated is precisely the way in which it represents an extreme take on our reality, in which everything we do could be influenced by the data (information, advertising, etc.) that is shown to us based on our browsing habits and on what we interact with when we are online. If whatever manages what we are continuously exposed to was not an algorithm whose final aim is only to induce us to buy products, but an artificial super-intelligenceits ability to condition our vision of reality to push us to become what it wants (or what someone else has decided) does not seem like something impossible at all.

 

I must admit that while watching the third season, I looked several times with suspicion at the cookie banner that appears every time I visit a site for the first time!

For my personal taste, up to that point my appreciation of Westworld had been growing, so I was afraid of what I would find in the fourth season. After I finished watching it, however, my first comment was: wow!

 

I have to say that I enjoyed every minute of all the episodes and I can confirm that it is my favourite science fiction series after Battlestar Galactica.

It is practically impossible to go into detail without spoiling, so I will limit myself to a few scattered considerations.

 

After the finale of season three, which partly seemed to take inspiration from the basic idea of the film “Futureworld” (the sequel to the original film “Westworld” by Crichton), I didn’t know what to expect from this fourth. I certainly didn’t expect to find myself faced with a real role reversal between humans and androids. In reality, the theme of conditioning of freewill by an artificial intelligence (metaphor of the current algorithms that already influence our lives), which is dear to me (and which you can find in some of my books), should have warned me. The evolution that takes place in the fourth season, after all, seems like an almost natural consequence, in terms of the logic of developing a story. Except that it is taken so far beyond the initial premises that it leaves the viewer speechless.

 

Added to all this, there are the numerous elements inserted into the plot that brought to mind similar elements I used in my books (I can’t tell you what it is, because it would be a huge spoiler!), albeit in a completely different context. Seeing my fantasies shown in a similar way by a science fiction series of this level was truly exciting. It’s a sort of creative convergence that made me feel in perfect harmony with this work of fiction. At moments, it was as if the TV was reading my mind and showing me the story I wanted to see. Crazy.

 

All this exaltation, however, did not prevent me from pointing out some critical aspects.

 

First, I asked myself some questions that were not answered.

Is there only one city left in the world? Or are there others too, and are they all made the same way? From what we see in the series, the first option seems to be the correct one, but nothing is explained, which is undoubtedly a shortcoming.

If this is the situation, it seems a bit excessive to me, even if 23 years have passed.

And, speaking of excesses, the events in the last episode seemed a little rushed to me.

 

Honestly, I don’t like apocalyptic contexts, because that’s what it’s all about, and in particular it bothered me that in a certain sense the story, which, once out of the park, had opened up to a thousand possibilities, is now tremendously closed in on itself.

These aspects, however, do not undermine the good quality of the rest of the series, which deals with very current themes literally surrounding us, and does so by reinventing them in a dystopian future through a very complicated plot (another aspect that is particularly congenial to me). In short, it forces us to think on multiple levels, both to find our current reality in it and to put together the myriad of pieces that are shown to us in non-chronological order, in order to be able to get to the bottom of it. Its vision is a real challenge.

 

Furthermore, it must be considered that this story is not over.

The finale of the season, in reality, is not an ending. The authors deliberately left it open in the hope of a renewal for a final season. Unfortunately, however, a few months later, the confirmation arrived that the series had been cancelled.

 

It’s really a shame, because I was really curious to see what they would have come up with, since really, after the tragic events of the last episode, they had got themselves into quite a mess. Of course, they had the possibility of taking the story where they wanted, given that they had practically made a clean sweep of everything else, but the risk of coming out with an inadequate epilogue was very high.

 

In all honesty, if they had renewed it, I would never have wanted to find myself in the shoes of the creators and screenwriters.

 

Who knows, maybe one day some production company will acquire the rights to complete the story. Or I would like them to publish the ending as a novel, so I could imagine it in my head with greater freedom, and if I didn’t like it, pretend it never existed.

 

Or maybe it’s better to leave it like that, like something that could have been perfect. Thanks to the absence of a real ending, nothing will be able to deny this impression.

 

There is certainly one thing I hope for most of all, that is, that they never make a reboot of it!

 

I’m a tennis addict

 I might add: and I’m proud of it!

Sardegna Open 2023, Cagliari (Italy), picture by ®Rita Carla Francesca Monticelli


No, wait, this doesn’t mean I play tennis. I have never played tennis. My father tried to teach me something when I was a little girl, but then, due to lack of time, I didn’t continue.

No, I don’t play tennis. I like watching others do it, especially good ones.


I discovered this passion of mine only a few years ago. In the past I watched this sport with curiosity, but only every now and then I had the opportunity to watch a match, also because it was objectively more difficult to catch one on free-to-air TV in Italy before the arrival of SuperTennis (the FITP - Italian tennis federation - channel). But every time, I was hypnotised by that ball that went back and forth on the court and by the prowess of those guys and gals who hit it.


This probably comes from the fact that my father played when he was young and there was a court right in our apartment block, so it wasn’t uncommon to find some used tennis balls among my toys.

But then I concentrated on football, on supporting Cagliari (the team from my city), which I still do.


Then came the pandemic, and tennis, being a non-contact sport, was one of the first to resume. So I started following it more consistently, and in a short time I was hooked.


There are many things I like about tennis.


First of all, the fact that it’s physics in action: that ball goes there because it was hit a certain way.


Secondly, it is an extremely psychological sport. There are shots, talent, fitness, tactics, but what can make the difference is how the player feels in that moment. It takes very little, almost nothing, to change the inertia of a match just because the player feels confident in his abilities or loses this confidence. Mental strength, which allows you to forget your own mistake or an opponent’s feat and start playing as if nothing had happened, can prevail over the rest.


Also, tennis matches are like thrillers. Sometimes all it takes is an episode, perhaps a lucky one, a twist, which can decide the fate of a game and create the conditions to overturn the result. It’s never over until it’s over. A player can be on the brink of the abyss, three match points down (even more, if it’s a tie-break), and cancel them, then win the set and ultimately win the match. Anything could happen.


And then there is everything that happens off court: the preparation, the planning of the season, the commitment of the players, the ambition, the ability to improve oneself to become stronger in all aspects.


The best thing is to see players who, from the beginning of their career, achieve their first successes, accumulate points, and slowly rise in the ranking, measure themselves against the great and then perhaps become like or better than them.


In all this I find inspiration.


Finally, tennis has the peculiarity of being practised all year round. With the exception of December, every week there is at least one tennis tournament from the major circuits (ATP and WTA) and, with all the Italians, both men and women, achieving excellent results in this sport, this means that there is always a match worth watching. I often have breakfast in front of a match on TV, perhaps after getting up early so as not to miss it, given that the tours touch all continents. In a way, it’s comforting to know that I can watch something I like even every day if I want.


Initially I did it every now and then, but then I started to get to know the players better, their stories, and become passionate about their game. Now I find myself organising my life, both daily and concerning my scheduled commitments, including any holidays, in such a way as not to miss the tournaments that interest me.


And, sometimes, one of my holidays is nothing more than a trip to go and see a tournament, and then while I’m there, I also act as a tourist.


I admit that being self-employed makes things a lot easier for me! If I had fixed work hours, it would be a big problem to see a match in the morning and afternoon or, even worse, during the night.


It might seem that tennis takes up time, a lot of time. On the one hand, it is true since sometimes, at the beginning of a big tournament like a Slam, it happens that there are even four or five matches of Italian tennis players in one day, some of which do not overlap and therefore which I can watch. On the other hand, however, having this type of commitment leads me to make better use of my time.


Having a limited number of hours available to work on something, rather than generally the whole day, pushes me to be more disciplined because I will be able to get my reward afterwards. For example, now that I’m writing this article I’m waiting for a TV match to start and this pushes me to write quickly, instead of sitting there thinking about it a lot or, worse, messing around on some social network!


But it also helped me review my priorities. I realised that I often dealt with unnecessary things more out of habit than out of real interest (now lost). Indeed, in the end they made me feel unnecessarily dissatisfied, since it no longer gave me pleasure to do them and at the same time they did not lead to the desired results. Much better to leave them aside and watch a bit of tennis, to find the good mood (especially in case of victory!) necessary to face my duties and new stimulating challenges.


But I have to admit: tennis is addictive. I notice it when I don’t have any matches to watch for a couple of days. Not to mention in December! But in that case at least, I console myself with figure skating on ice.


Anyway, it is a nice addiction, one of those without side effects.

Okay, now I really have to go: not only has the match started, but I wrote the last sentences during a changeover!

Detective Shaw’s London: Curtis Green Building (New Scotland Yard)

I opened this series of articles with the old New Scotland Yard, which from 1967 until October 2016 was in a building at 10 Broadway, and it seems right to close it with the headquarters of the Metropolitan Police Service of London, which has occupied a building on Victoria Embankment since November 2016: the Curtis Green Building.

Located along the Thames, more or less opposite the London Eye, the Curtis Green Building owes its name to the architect who designed it in the 1930s: William Curtis Green. It is a white building in neoclassical style built between 1935 and 1940 and which has always belonged to the London Metropolitan Police. It was initially used as an extension of the police headquarters, housing the forensic science and technology departments. Later, when the headquarters was moved to Broadway, it became the Whitewall Police Station until 2010.

The renovation of the building which took place between 2015 and 2016 was designed by Arup (the same company that created the London Eye and the new roof of the departures concourse of King’s Cross Station) and gave it a touch of modernity while maintaining the original structure. On the roof of the new entrance delimited by a glass wall, a sign bearing the words “New Scotland Yard” was positioned, while on its right side the famous rotating sign was installed, taken from the old location. At the other end of the entrance is the Eternal Flame, a flame always lit in commemoration of the fallen officers.


Leaving the Curtis Green Building and crossing the road, you find yourself on the Victoria Embankment riverfront, from which you can admire the buildings on the opposite bank. If, however, you walk in the opposite direction to the flow of the waters of the Thames, you will soon arrive near Big Ben and Palace of Westminster (house of the British Parliament).

While moving to the Curtis Green Building, the Metropolitan Police, as well as taking the rotating sign with them, also moved the Black Museum, which unfortunately continues to not be open to the public.

Obviously, unless you get arrested, it isn’t possible to see the inside of this building, but I think that, given the optimal position, it’s still worth it to admire it from the outside and take some photos (the images in this article are by David Holt CC 2.0).

Having become New Scotland Yard, the Curtis Green Building appears in the last book of the Detective Eric Shaw Trilogy, “Beyond the Limit”, precisely in this capacity and above all as the headquarters of one of the teams (Eric’s) from Forensic Services of the Metropolitan Police.

Several scenes of the novel are set inside it, which obviously I have never seen and to describe which I relied on my imagination, shaping it to my liking based on the needs of the story (in reality it is substantially different). In the latter we mainly see Eric in his new office, the IT laboratory, the meeting room, and also Jane’s office. To be honest, I don’t even know if there is any section of Forensic Services in the Curtis Green Building (whose main laboratory in London is located in Lambeth Road), in any case I decided to have the characters move within its walls because of its geographical position (in front of the London Eye) and above all because, being a renovated building, it represents the ideal place for a new beginning in Eric’s life.

But to understand what I’m talking about, I’m afraid you’ll have to read the book.