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Immense, but excessive work
First of
all I must say that I love long science fiction novels. I love them because
they have complex plots and do not end immediately. And, if a novel is
beautiful, you do not want it to end. For this reason I faced fearlessly the
1300 pages of “Limit”. I came out with conflicting opinions.
I awarded
it with four stars because in the end the author really made it. The final part
(say the last third of the book) is in fact the most successful and overall I
have to say that I had fun. But I could not go further because, with all my
good will, the book has more than a few flaws.
First of
all, the author employs perhaps a hundred pages at the beginning to present all
the characters. It goes without saying that it creates a great confusion in
your head, as you do not have the time to assimilate the information. There is
a list of all the characters at the end of the book, but it does not seem right
to me that the reader should consult it every time. It would have been more appropriate
to introduce them slowly in the unfolding of the story, so as not to kill the
interest and the pace at the beginning.
Another
aspect that puzzled me is the passing of the author from an omniscient point of
view (which also sees what the characters cannot see) to a limited point of
view, even within the same scene. More than once I had to re-read a paragraph
from the beginning to figure out who was thinking about what was being written.
In short, I found it a bit confusing. As the story continues, however, the
problem is reduced since the author tends to assign scenes to the individual
character and avoid showing what nobody could see.
In all
this, however, I tend to find a certain inconsistency.
But by far
the biggest problem with this book is the excess of info-dump. At least one
third of the novel consists of information that could be summarized or simply
omitted. Pages and pages of unlikely political fiction or background of the
characters, which the reader forgets a second after reading them, unless they
skip or read them diagonally. Not to mention the fact that the inclusion of
these absolutely fake parts completely arrests the action even for fifty pages,
creating unnatural pauses in the scenes. The characters find themselves doing
long and complicated conversations, therefore improbable, that look like real
lessons and certainly not normal chatting. Honestly, I could not imagine that
certain characters could stay so long concentrated to talk about stuff like
that.
In short,
boredom.
Finally the
finish is predictable. Once you kill almost everybody and slow down the action,
you give the reader all the tools to understand who the leader of the bad guys
is, well before the revelation. On the other hand a reader who engages in a
novel of 1300 pages is sly, therefore to greater reason they feel undervalued
if you propose them such an obvious ending.
After all
these criticisms you may wonder why such a high rating. Simple. The parts on
the Moon and space are stunning. The action scenes are well orchestrated and
exciting. The setting is the most impressive I have read in recent times. But
most of all I loved the character of Julian Orley, crazy, visionary and
optimistic, as well as his daughter Lynn (mad as a hatter) and son Tim (loving
and practical), and the latter’s wife Amber (the one who understands them all).
They are very well built and you can really feel in tune with them.
Instead, I
have appreciated less Owen Jericho, who measured with much less fascinating
places and situations, but he sometimes failed to keep up with the majesty of
the plot. He is a character with many weaknesses, who would have demanded a
higher real depth and perhaps a real growth at the end of the story. The author
has tried to develop him and to tell (but do not to show) his growth, but in my
opinion he didn’t succeed. Yoyo, instead, is annoying and unnecessary.
Finally, a
mention to the villains. I was annoyed that the survived one was also, so to
speak, devoid of soul, stereotyped, in short the supervillain, while another more
interesting villain was killed in a rather stupid way. I liked him because he
basically acted according to his own logic, showing to have a consciousness.
The killing of such a character was really a pity.
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